Feedback for Santhosh
by Mustafa
I felt
that your work was done to a high degree of effectiveness. I particularly
enjoyed your media bit as it was thorough and informational. The picture is
really beautifully made and the question asked is appropriate for the section
you have. I felt that your journals were great but if more detail and character
related behavior was added it would make you really sound like you were Dantes
or Faria. Your most memorable moment was very descriptive. I feel you could
work on telling us how your most memorable moment made it the most memorable.
