By Jordan
Mustafa-
Your
character analysis is very detailed, and the quotes you picked fit the
characters that were being analysed very well. However, it is a bit confusing
how you placed all their information in one paragraph, and re-stated it in
character in another paragraph. Your questions were thought provoking for the
most part and aren’t too easy to answer. For your most memorable moment, while
I understood why you felt as though the scene was so memorable, there was a lack
of reasons. The description of said scene was very detailed however, although it
seemed like it was just a condensed version of what was written in the book. Finally,
your style and structure analysis dissects the author’s writing style well, and
you managed to pick out many of the more interesting writing devices within the
book.
Santhosh-
In your
character analysis, the initial journal entry by the character doesn’t explain
much about them or their goals and motives. While these were covered more on
the second parts of the analysis, I feel as if you could have shown some of
this in the journal entry. Additionally, the quotes you picked fit the
characters rather well. Some of you questions were rather straight-forward, and
the answers can be found in the book rather easily. Some of your questions
required more thought, but I feel as if they could have been more
thought-provoking. Finally, I don’t feel as if the poster in your media section
shows much about the story, as gold is not a major plot point within the book.
The video is well done however, as it describes the events of your section in
good detail, and could likely even draw in new readers. Also, the music fits
the scenes oddly well.
