Thursday, 9 January 2014

Feedback for Andy

by Jordan
Your character analysis is very detailed, and it is helpful that the analysis was broken up into separate sections. The quotes you included fit the characters as well. Additionally, your questions were thought-provoking and interesting to think about. Your most memorable moment was described in detail, and you gave good reasons as to why it was so memorable. Your analysis of setting shows that you found most of the details regarding the culture and mindsets of people at the time. However, it did not state the influence Napoleon and Bonapartisim had on the story. Finally, your analysis of diction points out all the major details in the translated work’s writing style.