ANDY
I thought your work was done with great quality. A lot of effort is evident in here. Your character analysis is great and I enjoyed reading through diaries. You categorized the sections, which was convenient and overall, the character analysis has got to be the best of your work. Your analysis of setting was very descriptive and provided a good understanding of how language and time connected like puzzle blocks. I would have liked it if you were to convey some more information on how exactly the language spoken linked to the time period and what made it interesting for you to read. Your most memorable moment was very well done as well. The connection was strong and the theme you pulled out was going beyond expectations so well done!
JORDAN
Your work is definitely noticeable for your diction. That really stood out for me and made the experience better right from the start. To start off, your most memorable moment was excellent. You explained the moment but you lacked one thing; a deeper explanation to WHY you found the memory to be the most memorable memory. My favorite piece from you has to be your contemporary relevance. It was so thorough, had so much information and logic and was all too true. It was well written and I really do like this piece especially. I would have liked it better if you connected it to the book in some way though. The character analysis was good too but I feel you could have done more better on the journals, they had too little information in my eyes.
