Section 1 Feedback - By Andy
Mustafa
For your most memorable moment, I feel that you explained the scene very clearly and well, but your reasoning needs to have more depth and explanation. For your analysis of style and structure, I really liked that you took a solid quote and really expanded it to the broad idea of how justice was years ago. You really took your time to explain expand your ideas about the characters. One thing lacking about your writing in role is that it's very straight forwards. You're simply stating their characteristics when I think you could slowly hint at it through the means of their dialogue to really show it instead of saying "I am". The questioning is very plot based and I think you could add some hints to get them to think a certain way.
Santhosh
Your character analysis is very plot based. Most of it is simply summarized parts of the plot while I think you could show more about the character themselves such as their goals and motivations. I feel that your poster image should show a little more about the plot, Edmond wanting revenge for his framing, but I really like the way it looks and pops out. Making a video summary was very creative and I liked how you took parts of the movie and narrated over it. You could've put more fitting music and maybe switched it up a bit depending on the scenes being shown, but I feel that you got the main parts of the section summarized in it. Your questions were very plot based and doesn't get the reader to think outside the box.
