I think you could've organized your writing better maybe with subtitles to state exactly what's going to be in a paragraph. Your character analysis was really good, especially your writing in role. It really got into his personality, goals, and interest, but most of your sentences begin with "I have" or "I am" and that makes it seem like your stating the qualities.
Your questions were mainly plot based, but you at least included one question that had an analysis and opinion.
I like how you related with a main theme of the story, revenge, to problems that happen in modern day. It brings up some valid points about society and their idea of "payback" at least in an adolescent perspective.
