Section 1 Feedback
Overall i think you did an amazing job. I think it would have been better if you expanded on your most memorable moment journal and to clarify more on why it was captivating to you. Also i liked how you used effective examples and quotes to back up your information and went in depth on analyzing your points. You could also remember to site your quotes. Another thing was I think it would be better to clarify what type of "writing in role" you were doing, and to talk more like the characters,
